Posted in Poetry ... an attempt ! In my eyes Posted on February 27, 2015February 27, 2015 by Shruti gopinath When I wear my heart on my sleeves You see love in my eyes, And devotion for thyself. But when it is my mind that I wear A strange sense of determination, And coldness prevails. Shruti. Share this:TwitterFacebookLike Loading... Related Author: Shruti gopinath I am a dentist trying my hand at writing. I am here to let my thoughts unravel! View All Posts
Lovely composition. Read mine http://avespring.blogspot.in/search/label/shayari LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
I wish words would just come to me that make such great poetry! I really love the contrast between emotions and intellect. Brilliant idea 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Thanks Anoop, I wasn’t planning to write anything definitely not a poem. Words suddenly started flowing and I only obeyed! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Did you watch Anaconda where JL was the lead actress? 😛
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Yes I have.
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hmmm there was the forest… which seemed like impossible to explore and tag safe 🙂
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So?
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So the photo in the post reminded me of that forest
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Compliment? Or sarcasm?
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Eyes know what I meant 😉
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Got it!
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Very pretty eyes, and the lines
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Aww! Thank you Jithin! 😀
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🙂 You are welcome
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Lovely!! 🙂
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Thank you so much Shruti 😀
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Lovely composition. Read mine http://avespring.blogspot.in/search/label/shayari
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Thank you so much, will do it! Cya have a nice day! 😀
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Nice lines…both heart and mind at work for you 🙂
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I only hope they work together 😀
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I wish words would just come to me that make such great poetry! I really love the contrast between emotions and intellect. Brilliant idea 🙂
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That was such a beautiful comment there Robin…thank you soo much 😀
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Great! Love it!
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Thank you soooo much! 😀
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Such nice lines Shruti…. ❤ it… 🙂
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Thanks dear! 😀
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Hey Shruti,
It was short but very sweet 🙂 Well written.
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Thanks Anoop, I wasn’t planning to write anything definitely not a poem. Words suddenly started flowing and I only obeyed!
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Cool.. let words flow all over you again.
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Danq
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That was wonderful , Shruti 🙂
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Thanks Samjoth! 🙂
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🙂
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kiski yaad aayi?
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Just a spontaneous flow of thoughts! 🙂
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its reali nice. liked it
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na i’m Supreet 🙂
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Oops I’m so sorry! 😦
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